My Passion
Fashion
is my passion
I always dress
to impress
And i'm the best at this
And when you see me you already know imma be flee
Young and fly got a lot of swag
And I got that new jag
And you know I stay with that hunnit thousand dollar cash
Maybe the coolness of the night
Might have me wearing something that will keep me cool
So I won't be out here looking like a plane fool
I probably will even spin
On a pair of my timbs
Nd grin
At my dad once I leave out for a spin
With my head and chin
Up
Cause i'm proud
Of who I am and i'll shout it out loud
Shoes, shirt versace
Racks all up in my pockets
SOY the team
Yea, we the hot new thing
Rolex and flexin
Got you guessing
You think you the top dog?
Nah bro you can suck on my hot dog
I'm like a nerd but in the way of a sneak geek
And i'm a money makin machine
And I know you see me with my new balmains
And when I run to that bag crossing the bridge it might collapse making a loud boom
And I will chase that bag in my i8 like a cheetah after its prey
And when I grow up I just wanna have tons of that bag
And you already know there is ben franks hugging in my pocket
But most of all fashion
is my passion
And i'm always competing against myself to get better at this
I like the way you worded it because it wasn't like a poem it was like a rap which is cool
ReplyDeleteI liked this poem! This was really good. The title was great and I liked your few rhymes. Great job!
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ReplyDeleteI knew fashion was your passion, but dang. Fashion is apart of you and you showed that through your poem.
ReplyDeleteGood Job!
Giorgina-i thought you were very creative
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used rhyming as a way to connect certain important stanzas and enhance different parts.
ReplyDeleteI did not enjoy this poem. You should be more original and creative. It was funny though.
ReplyDeletedarrol. good job!.. your poem was unique and it was different. i liked you was showed how much you liked fashion in your poem. but overall it was a decent poem.
ReplyDeleteI thought your poem was unique because you had lots of rhyming throughout. I liked the similes and metaphors that you also used in your poem like where you said your "like a cheetah after its prey."
ReplyDeleteI like how this actually relates to you, and express your love for fashion. I think it is awesome that a boy likes fashion like you do and isn't afraid to show it
ReplyDeleteGreat job!
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ReplyDeleteI'm surprised dude you did good i like how you proudly claimed SOY because you know that's a part of you so you put it in your poem along with your balmains and how your a "Young and fly got a lot of swag".
i like how you used a lot of rhyme that made sense going along with the poem and how the connections in the poem made sense to the title
ReplyDeleteKhaleelah- I liked your flow throughout the poem. I like how you made references to different brands and stuff. It was almost like a rap. Good job.
ReplyDeleteRashaad- I liked your rhymes, and the way you repeated Fashion Is My Passion. Some of your poem were humorous, and others were saying how you were motivated by cash.
ReplyDeletei liked how this poem represented your identity and your "hobby" - julienne
ReplyDeleteYour poem was very creative, I like your choice of words. This really relate to you in all ways. It was nice not to have the poem only about you meaning you included your friends!!!
ReplyDeleteBraun-I thought your poem was very creative, but real in your sense, and that is really all that maters when writing your spoken word poem. I also liked how you use multiple examples of metaphors, such as the time when you said "a money makin' machine".
ReplyDeletei love your poem bc its shows how you dress has an impact on your identity and i like how you added the par i told you to add the suck my hotdog thing
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