Passion
My true passion
Is all about fashion
Swaggy like D Wade
Somethin I’ll never trade
Flying high like Jordan in his prime
One day they’ll all be mine
Ray Allen did it best
He never settled for less
A Giant like OBJ
Check out his new colorway
Amazing like Russell Westbrook
So dope you have to look
Main topic like Dez Bryant
I would spend my last to buy it
You can’t keep up with me
Yea yea I know I can get flee
I feel legendary
When they come through early
At times I can be a hypebeast too
Especially if they’re blue
OOH
But my favorites are the retros
A classic in every way
And when you see me comin
I know you’ll have somethin to say
So fly
Skip the line and get em on time
You might be a collector
But me, I’m a self proclaimed guru, call me a professor
It feels like magic when I get a new pair
I’m like John Wall
New kicks make me feel like I’m 10 feet tall.
I like how you referred to different people throughout your poem, it was overall really cool
ReplyDeleteI like how you kept comparing your style to famous people and showing how "swaggy" you are. You did a good job personifying you style throughout your poem.
ReplyDeleteGood Job!
I liked this poem, the rhymes flowed and each line wasn't too long. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteI love how you included many people, which was super creative. You also explained how you felt about each person you described.
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i liked how you compared basketball players to yourself. you described yourself in a good way throughout the poem. it flowed as one.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you did not use the same rhyme scheme over and over again,also how each stanza went with the next.
ReplyDeleteDarryl- I enjoyed your poem and how you compared yourself to other famous poeple
ReplyDeleteI like how you didn't just talk about your clothes, you made your shoes more important.
ReplyDeleteKhaleelah- Your poem was really good. I liked how you compared your style to like famous people. I like how you showed your style through various ways.
ReplyDeleteI liked how your poem was all about you and it let us get to know you in a much closer and better way. Your figurative language bar was set high and you reached it. I also liked how you compared yourself to all time greats.
ReplyDeleteooohhh calebb!!!!!!! i didnt think you were gonna make a poem about your shoes even though you got good shoe game and you can dress "My true passion Is all about fashion" i thought your poem was gonna be about how you embrace your dreads but over all its still a really good poem i also like how you compared your self to famous well known basketball players you did really good memorizing it as well.
ReplyDeleteGiorgina - i like how you real told about you self and what makes you happy
ReplyDeleteBraun-You did a great job expressing how you feel through different people or super sport stars. But you also used them as metaphors.
ReplyDeletei like how you also had a lot of rhyme,and your poem had a meaning to the title and it made sense
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ReplyDeletei like how you mentioned all of these important people to compare you things or yourself to them good poem
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