Cheerleader
The girl with the cheer passion
From the time I hit the floor I still get butterflies in my tummy. The break of my wrist broke the chains of fear. Now I feel unstoppable.
From the car to the bus to the plane, all the laughter that we bring as we beat the other teams.
The girl with the cheer passion
Who cheers like the flames dancing in the fire
From the time I learned how to flip I was excited and scared. Once I got my confidence I was the greatest of them all. Now I know I can accomplish anything. The fear in my heart is now gone. I am the unstoppable cheerleader.
The girl with the cheer passion
Who cheers like the flames dancing in the fire
Amazing stepheni, you seem very confident when it comes down to cheerleading and I've watched you preform with your AAU team and you guys are very good!!! I love it
ReplyDeletei like how you kept the poem short and simple but it had a lot of meaning about your life.
ReplyDeleteThis poem is really good. I like how you said "The break of my wrist broke the chains of my fear". I liked how you use literary devices to express the way you feel when you cheer.
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Girl!!
I love this poem!! I like that you brought something you love doing it and overall it as an amazing poem!!
ReplyDeleteI really liked how the poem was about you and your identity, but was light and upbeat. I think it was nice that you summarized how a competition would be, where you would go, and a little bit about what you do.
ReplyDeleteGreat work!!!
I liked how you talked about your passion. I also talked about my passion in my poem. Good poem.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you compared yourself to the flames dancing in a fire and how you also shared some of trial and error moments of learning new tricks.
ReplyDeleteI love how that now you're complete and happy!! i like how yiu talk about how cheerleading has empowered you
ReplyDeletekennedy-i liked your poem.. how you had the desire to talk about you do outside of school, your team is good too
ReplyDeleteI liked how you talked about what you are what you are and the passion that you have. I liked the metaphors that really blended in with your poem which gave me a better idea on what your passion is.
ReplyDeleteBraun - I thought you did good on writing how you(just you) felt throughout the poem and how you were self-focused but kept it simple.
ReplyDeleteThat was so good! You fit so much meaning into a little poem and it was so inspiring and beautiful! The words all flowed together so well and I could really feel your passion behind all of this! Great job!
ReplyDeletei liked how you had a very cheerful poem it also had a very nice beat to it and i also liked how you showed you personality through the poem, good job
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Deletestephhhhhhhhhhhh good job i really like how you talked about when you hurt yourself!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI like how you like cheerleading and put it in yo poem
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